Nice.
Lot o' improvement. I came across this and remember I left a review for the previous version, and you did good this time.
The synth seems more subtle, it just seems like the second chorus would sound better with the "boom boom boom, chink, cha-ching" .
Nice thouuuugh.
Buen.
It's Radiohead, the "H" is no capitolized I don't think.
Your voice is soothing, but you jump the gun and your voice sort of can't sustain the tone sometimes. Same with your guitar-playing.
I'm not a fan of the early Radiohead stuff, even though I enjoy this song, but I can say you do a fair job. Your title subtracts from your credibility as a serious artist, in my opinion.
Great.
I promised I'd check this out once up.
Nice eerie feeling, and great job at keeping it consistent and reminescent. A great listen
thank you :D
Beautiful.
I love how you manage to add those 8-bit esque twists and transitions. I wish I had the ability to incorperate that.
Great stuff, you know what you're doing.
Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Uhmmmm, it's kind of bad.
I'm pretty sure this is a joke or friendly post.
a joke??? it's meant to be in a game
NIce.
Dig the ambient feel, I just feel that a more powerful bass and some variation in the melody would do this good :).
Great.
The beats and melody were all there, but for some reason you always fall short of that powerful chorus.
Really work on adding power and getting more bass in there.
Splendoraful!
The crash is very dry and gets annoying after a while. A crash with more ring would really increase the easy listening.
This is very well arranged and organized though. Besides the cymbal which for the most part should only be in the beginning in my opinion, the instruments are great and blend beautifully and create the dark atmosphere that was great about that game.
By the way, is this the song for that big jack in the box guy? That boss battle was amazingly fun.
nope i kinda did them in out of order >_> because this boss theme is from the big puffer fish thing that is in water and you gotta electric it n stuff by entering rings but the jack in the box i am working on right now ill try to make the crashes less dry next time :D because it was the boss that came before this boss theme in order that is ...Im kinda orchestrating them out of order ;o but oh well :P
Bootiful.
Now besides the cheesily techno sound, that was one of your best. Consistent, not repetitive, is what makes this really danceable and east to listen to.
This may sound wierd and random but this sounds like a Gorillaz (not a big fan) song. I can just imagine the singer singing along.
Agreed.
More variety in the actual song would've helped, but the intro was a treat itself.
alrighty thanks fo reviewin' me.
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