Nice!
I found it quite interesting and thought it was a good listen.
Critically, I felt that the vocals were a little too dominant over the instrumentals, but thats not too bad since you have a good voice. I wish I could throw some example of what this reminds me of, because it is very familiar, and thats because its really great. Great emotional song.
On a side note, you REALLY sound like the singer of Red Animal War to me. I don't know why :D.