Hmmm
It kind of sounds like its completely improvised, but if the drummer keeps it together I would really enjoy this. It has mistakes, but I can sense the hints of progressive/experimental influences. At least I think I can, all I can say is practice and keep going. You should check out early fall of troy, cap'n jazz, and perhaps lady radiator for lack of a third example.
haha, yes it was.
The drums are actually artificial, i composed all this is garage band using my guitar and keyboard.
thanks loads for your review, will improve! :)
Settling.
A nice driving, steady song. I appreciate our use of vocals, although personally I feel you could've tried to experiment with your tone a little bit.
Always great to see something interesting and purposeful.
Thanks for the review man. Glad you enjoyed it!
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Truly the most beautiful music around, I can't even comprehend how these notes find eachother.
WOW!!!
Thanks for the awesome review.
Glad you loved it IbeSm.
Yeah
Great stuff. Reminds me of acid trip video soundtracks and such.
I'm happy you like the sounds. Rest of the song is kind of fucked up and messy. So I picked out the cleanest sounding loop to upload.
Once I figure out how to begin it and how to end it I'll make it into a full song. Shit is exhausting though.
Again.
I love your experimentation and it creates something atmospheric and entertaining. You know how to keep someone listening and let the music stand by itself.
Better than half the shit on 8bitpeoples.
hurrah!
Excellent.
Great fucking sound, great melodies and arpeggios. A very good piece and one of the best I've heard in a while.
wow thank you! :D
Interesting.
If you don't mind some suggestions, lust is about greed and adrenaline. To simulate that desire it has to drive, become faster, progress. To help this, maybe a rapid, yet faint, shaker (more rapid then the one you have) in the background. Then you could filter some breathing as I've seen many artist do before.
The bongos are in the right place, and should keep that steady tempo, but perhaps they could be a little more ghostly and tantalizing, which could use some reverb or such.
I enjoyed the pacing, though, and the melodies are very interesting and mesh greatly. With some work this could be quite a culmination, something I wouldn't mind on a long drive or an art session.
With all this, I think it finally needs a climax (suggestive of the subject) to disorient and push it into the next section. I'll look out for this in the future!
thanks for the constructive critism after listening to it again i do agree it needs a climax but i think i was getting a bit frustrated with the song hope u like the next pt gluttony
Great stuff.
Sorry about being a little late on the comment, and it really saddens me that nobody else could give you a few words.
This piece is beautiful, explorative, and a nice brief experimentation. I love the melodies and harmonies and would love to see this expanded and maybe experimented into a little more. Reminiscent of maybe some Hail to the Thief or one of Rodriguez-Lopez's outfits.
If I could get the resources to start some IDM sampling projects this would be on my list <_<.
Thanks for the listen, Favorite'd.
Thank you so much!
I want to expand it further, and introduce some lyrics. =]
Beautiful.
Not my forte of music or criticism, but definately well done. The instruments are all beautifully composed and blended and the song drives seamlessly. Amazing work.
Thanks!
Not bad.
I hate to sound imposing, but it really reminds me of some really old stuff of mine back when I first started (deleted by now).
Mainly I feel that the bass-swell doesn't really fit, and that drum beat (the one I used oh so often) needs a counterpart for variety.
Besides that and some issues with consistency and perhaps fluidity I'd say you should keep going and see where you end up. Definately keep the originality though, that's important.
Thank you, I'll work on that. I'm still new to this whole thing.
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